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(( استاد حمیدی مدرس آیلتس و مشاور رسمی در امور مهاجرت و کاریابی بین المللی ))
The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present.
Overall, the town has most notably shown an increase in housing development, which indicates a higher population and a move away from agriculture and farming.
One change that stands out is that there has been a significant redevelopment over the whole period of what was once farmland. Housing now dominates the area to the east of the river stoke. In 1986 there were shops and just a handful of residential properties. Now there are no shops nor farmland left, although the post office is still there. The bridge over the river stoke still stands as it did in 1986Another noticeable change is that there have been more roads built around the housing complex. Additionally, the gardens, that were a feature in 1986, have been removed and the large houses were expanded and converted into a retirement home. The primary school still stands and has been extended in the decades since. The fence toward the river that was running north of the gardens in 1986 is no longer there. (189 words)
🔵 تحلیل گزارش نویسی رایتینگ تسک اول آکادمیک
ساختار پاراگرافی :
1⃣ پاراگراف مقدمه: پارافریز موضوع داده شده
2⃣ پاراگراف دیدگاه کلی: دیدگاه کلی شامل ویژگی های بارز
3⃣ پاراگراف بدنه اول: توصیف ویژگی های داده شده با ذکر جزییات با بیان سیر منطقی تغییرات در بازه زمانی مشخص
4⃣ پاراگراف بدنه دوم: توصیف ویژگی های داده شده با ذکر جزییات با بیان سیر منطقی تغییرات در بازه زمانی مشخص
✳️ برای دسته بندی، ارائه و نگارش اطلاعات داده شده از دو پاراگراف بدنه استفاده کنید و توجه داشته باشید که رایتینگ شما به
پاراگراف نتیجه گیری نیاز ندارد .
✅ برای توصیف نقشه ها و بیان تغییرات در آنها از این کلمات استفاده کنید :
برای توصیف توسعه یافتن :
enlarge
expand
extend
make bigger
develop
برای توصیف تخریب کردن
demolish
knock down
pull down
remove
tear down
cut down
برای توصیف اضافه شدن اماکن جدید :
construct
build
introduce
add
open up
برای توصیف تغییرات از چیزی به چیز دیگر :
convert
redevelop
replace
make into
modernise
renovate
در مثال های زیر سعی شده تا از کلمات بالا در جملات کامل برای درک بهتر از نحوه کاربرد این کلمات استفاده شود :
✅ The offices were demolished and the surrounding area was redeveloped with a new leisure centre opening up.
✅ The shopping centre was extended and the parking area was enlarged to accommodate more cars.
✅ The trees were cut down and a new office block was erected.
✅ A railway was constructed with the introduction of a new train station.
✅ The industrial area was modernised and made bigger with lots of new factories being built.
✅ The local government had the sports facilities renovated and the small park was made into a children’s playground.
✅ The park was replaced with a new housing complex.
به کاربرد صحیح ساختارهای مجهول در مثال های بالا توجه کنید .
برای توصیف جهت های جغرافیایی از این کلمات استفاده کنید :
to the north of
to the east of
in the west
to the south of
north west of
جملات مثال :
✅ The trees to the north of the river were cut down and a new office block was built.
✅ A railway was constructed to the east of the housing estate with the introduction of a new train station
✅ The forest to the west of the park was cut down and a new housing complex was constructed.
✅ The industrial area to the south west of the station was expanded.
برای توصیف محل قرارگیری اجسام یا اماکن از این حروف اضافه استفاده کنید :
on
next to
near
from north to south
from east to west
by
across from
nearby
between
beside
over
along
جملات مثال :
✅ Houses were constructed next to the primary school.
✅ The forest near the river was cut down.
✅ A new railway running from north to south was built.
✅ The footpath by the river was expanded.
✅ Parking facilities were added in the city centre.
✅ The school across from the park was extended and new sports facilities were built.